Questions and criticism about "The Shaper of Dreams" (English-speaking users only)

[Heroesilento]

It seems to have been a while since the last post and a couple of months since the last update. I'm interested in the continuation of the series and would, in fact be willing to assist with translation. German is not my strongest language; however, with my understanding of how the language works, I would be quite happy refine any basic translation or even edit a full translation (if you wish and if that is still a necessity).